This is our final clip, that we produced as a group. I think that the things that worked well was that because we were all friends and we knew each other well we were able to produce something that was to the best of our ability. To improve we could have used a wider range of shots that would have shown more of the setting right at the start. For us to get feedback we each placed a link on our facebook pages and asked all our friends to watch it and tell us what they thought. We each had a wide range of responses from our audience, but i asked people that wasnt in our target audience so that what they said would be different and we could take into consideration what they said. We also showed our friends and family's and asked them for their honest opinion on what they thought.
Some examples of the feedback that we got from people in our target audience were:
- ''The music was beautiful, yet haunting and it made me want to watch more''
- ''Great use of portrayal of something that happens everyday but without giving too much away''
- ''Loved the facial expressions on the female character, she showed a lot of emotion and gave the audience something to think about''
- ''Loved how the story line involved even the audience and not just the characters and it didnt give to much away which made me want to watch more''
- ''The soundtrack held a lot of emotion which really set the mood for the whole film''
- ''It was easy for us as the audience to follow the storyline and the ending was really emotional, i didnt want it to end''
- ''even though it wasnt the sort of film that i would normally watch, i found the characters easy to follow on and understand''
- ''even though it wasnt the sort of film that i would normally watch i liked the soundtrack, and i did find that the shots of the female on the hill was too much the same, i would of liked a wider range of shots but other than that it was great''
